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08/21/22 01:08 PM #11499    

 

Mark Schweickart

Woo Hoo! Toot! Toot! Did someone say it’s time for more of Mark’s horn-tooting? Why yes, now that you mention it... it is!  Toot! Toot!

I am happy to announce that I finally got around to putting up on Amazon a book I have been kicking around for the last few years. Here's the link:
https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0B6XS8BPN?psc=1&smid=ATVPDKIKX0DER&ref_=chk_typ_imgToDp

Before proceeding any further, let me give a shout out to a few classmates who helped me by being early readers of this – a huge Thank You to Larry Foster, Tim Lavelle, and Jack Maxwell for their feedback. And, of course, now I would like to further impose on them by asking them to write a review on the Amazon site. C’mon guys, once more into the breach!  (A plea that also goes out to anyone here on the Forum who might happen to read this someday.)

“So what the hell is this book about?” you ask. As many of you know, I am drawn to historical topics that I like to put into a more fictionalized form. You may remember me blathering on about my one-woman play about the life of Jessie Benton Frémont, or my screenplay series about Frédérick Auguste Bartholdi’s creation of The Statue of Liberty. In this latest endeavor, I have tried my hand at writing a novel.

Here’s the book’s front cover, and to answer your question, a synopsis from the back cover.

This historical novel introduces us to Verna, a young white woman, who is shaped by two oft-forgotten civil rights episodes – the 1943 Detroit race riot, and the 1961 Freedom Rides.

Arriving in Detroit in 1942, 19-year-old Verna has come looking for both work in the booming defense plants, as well as the start of her adult life, with whatever romance that might include. However, Detroit is not only booming, and in need of workers, it is also bubbling with racial turmoil that culminates in a little remembered, but quite horrific race riot – an event which sears into Verna the complexity and importance of race relations in this country.

Moving forward to 1958, Verna is now a 34-year-old single mother living in Ohio, who befriends Jerry, an 11-year-old white boy, who has just jeopardized his relationship with a black friend. (Okay, okay, so this Jerry character is a bit autobiographical, and readers of my earlier memoir might recognize his transgression repeated here. Sorry for the interruption – back to the synopsis.) When he calls on Verna to discuss his dilemma, their conversation takes us further into Verna’s world and the troubled racial awareness she carries with her from her time in Detroit.

Next we move to 1961, when the now 37-year-old Verna, tired of the mostly meaningless life she has been leading since her Detroit days, meets Harold, a similarly aged, black college professor. They join a newly formed group known as Freedom Riders who journey by bus into the South to test the compliance of desegregation laws concerning interstate travel – a journey which becomes exceptionally harrowing.

Of course, this is not just a recounting of two historical events. This is foremost Verna’s story – with her love opportunities, her struggle with single motherhood, and her perseverance through the chaos of Detroit in ’43 and the Freedom Rides of ’61 – both dramatically charged, if often-overlooked, civil rights episodes teeming with complexity, tragedy, and, as Verna’s soldier-boy Lenny might urge, perhaps a glimmer of hope.

 

Toot! Toot!

 


08/21/22 02:03 PM #11500    

 

David Mitchell

Footnote:

I still think Mark's story of Jesse Fremont was one of the single best pieces of fiction I have ever read. I read it over three nights, and by the second night I realized I didn't have to actually read the text. It was simply speaking to me off the pages. 


08/21/22 02:15 PM #11501    

 

Mark Schweickart

Wow, Dave, that's quite a compliment. Thank you!


08/21/22 02:45 PM #11502    

 

David Mitchell

Interesting yes. Boring? You bet!

Thougth I'd share a bit about my crazy driving assigment last night (and this morning)

I was informed that last night’s (repeat) wedding ceremony and reception at Ben’s little country house near Riceboro, GA cost in excess of $20 million! And we all thought Justin Bieber’s wedding at nearby Palmetto Bluff (which we also drove for 5 years ago) was a big deal. (only $2.5 million - Ha!)
 
Never got close enough to see the bride or groom. Never got near the main house - only the reception at the "Barn”. The property is quite large and spread out.
 
There must have been about 60 transportation vehicles from companies all over the region.
I arrived at 7:00pm and was used only once on the property until about 1:00am. Then I had a wedding guest run to nearby Richmond Hill at 1:00am and then finally back to the party, taking to a hotel in downtown Savannah by about 3:10am. Got back to the office in Bluffton at about 4:00am.
 
Both pickups were from the reception at the (gorgeous) ”barn” - see below. 
(Sorry I cannot get it right side up)

08/21/22 03:55 PM #11503    

 

Michael McLeod

wow mark. congrats. I am currently in deadline hell but will read up as soon as they let me out. At least I think that this is "deadline" hell.....but then it's awfully warm in here.....and I keep asking where the thermostat is and the guards ignore me. 


08/21/22 07:10 PM #11504    

 

James Hamilton, M. D.

Mark, ​​​​​​

What an accomplishment! There are many very creative members in our Class of '66, but I think you just stepped up to head of the class in that category. Congrats 💥!

Jim 


08/21/22 09:45 PM #11505    

 

Mark Schweickart

I kind of doubt that, Jim. It's more likely that I just toot my own horn louder. 


08/21/22 09:59 PM #11506    

 

James Hamilton, M. D.

Mark, ​​​​​​

Don't underestimate or minimalize your accomplishment. I get the feeling that this has been something that you have been wanting to do for a long time, perhaps for most of your adult life. Most of us never reach such a lofty goal. And, let's face reality, we don't have all that much time left.

Jim 


08/21/22 10:39 PM #11507    

 

Michael McLeod

I'll second Jim's compliment Mark. I only write when I'm whipped mercilessly by various evil deadlines.

If you wrote that taking orders from nobody or nothing apart from your own testicles that alone impresses me.


08/22/22 12:12 AM #11508    

 

Mary Margaret Clark (Schultheis)

Congratulations Mark on the publishing of your book.  I wrote a blog for several years and discovered how difficult it is to put one's ideas and thoughts into words that will resonate with one's audience.  I would take my hat off to you, but I never wear one!  Still, I bow to your accomplishment!


08/22/22 02:20 AM #11509    

 

Mark Schweickart

Thanks for all of the acknowledgments, guys. But just to be clear, this is not as if I actually found a real publisher. This is just Amazon, which has a system in place for folks like me who just want a way to self-publish their writing both in book form and Kindle e-book format. I am hoping you already know that, but just in case, I don't  want to accidentally over-toot my horn here, and mislead anyone into thinking I had landed a deal with a literary agency who then made a deal with a publisher.

Maybe I need to dial my toot back to a peep.

 

 

 


08/22/22 07:58 AM #11510    

Joseph Gentilini

CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR NEW BOOK, MARK!  VERY NICE ACHIEVEMENT.  JOE


08/22/22 08:56 AM #11511    

 

John Jackson

Mark, I agree with all the previous comments.  Publisher or not - it's a real accomplishment!


08/22/22 09:53 AM #11512    

 

Michael McLeod

Mark. Dude. Again:

It was clear that you did this on your own -- and that's as impressive as the work itself. 

Now quit using the word "toot." It's starting to irritate me.


08/22/22 01:12 PM #11513    

 

Daniel Brown

Mark


Congrats.

Your latest book is now sitting at #263 on my iPad of ebooks to read before I'm planted.
I'm sorry, but due to my declining reading speed it won't be until sometime in 2042 before I get to it. I'm sure the wait will be worth it. 


08/22/22 01:38 PM #11514    

 

Mark Schweickart

 

Dan -- hey, a sale's a sale, I always say. Besides, at age 96, this historical novel will be even more historical. Or who knows, maybe hysterical. I hope not.  
 

And Mike, okay I get your point. No more of that.
Tootaloo for now. 


 

 


08/22/22 02:44 PM #11515    

 

Michael McLeod

Dick. Hey how am I going to get my copy signed?


08/22/22 04:20 PM #11516    

 

Mark Schweickart

Mike – as if that's important.

Changing the subject, let's give a shout out to Joe Gentilini. It's his birthday today. "H.B. Old Man. Welcome to Club 74!"

 


08/22/22 04:31 PM #11517    

 

Janie Albright (Blank)

I have posted the first chapter of Mark Schweickart's new book Verna on our Class Showcase page. It's about 10 items down on the far left of homepage. 

Mark, I haven't started to read it yet but I can say I love the cover. Very engaging. 
 

 


08/22/22 05:34 PM #11518    

Joseph Gentilini

MARK, HOW CAN I GET AN AUTOGRAPHED COPY OF YOUR BOOK.  LET ME KNOW HOW MUCH IT IS AND I'LL SEND YOU A CHECK (ASSUMING I HAVE YOUR POSTAL ADDRESS).  THANKS.  JOE


08/22/22 06:34 PM #11519    

 

Mark Schweickart

Thanks Janie for putting up a sample on the Showcase. And thanks for the compliment on the cover design. My wife, Maddy, did that for me. She wanted something subtle to suggest the theme of journeying – first by bus to Detroit, and then later with the Freedom Riders.

I asked Janie if she could put the first chapter on the Showcase since it is an extremely short chapter and wouldn't clog up the Showcase too much. But more importantly, I thought this would give one a quick sense of how historical information is blended into my fictional character's world. For example, in addition to meeting Verna, you also get a quick overview of Detroit during the change-over from car to munitions manufacturing during the early years of the War. And, in case you are wondering, the wording on the two posters that catch Verna's eye as she is leaving the bus station are from actual posters. I just used the wording from them rather than inserting pictures of the  posters in case there might be copywrite concerns with using the images. I probably should have used the images, that would have been stronger, but I chose to play it safe. The actual posters looked like this:

                                                    

In case you have trouble reading this last line, it says, "We want our girls to walk on the street  not raped."

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


08/22/22 07:59 PM #11520    

 

Joseph D. McCarthy

Mark allow me to offer my congrats to a long list of classmates.  Toot Toot; wtf!!!

 

Also I wanted to add that I had an enjoyable lunch today at Tommy's on Lane Avenue with Mr. Al Judy and Mr. Richard McNamara.  It has been a yearly luncheon (different locations) event for the three of us.


08/22/22 10:14 PM #11521    

 

David Mitchell

Joe,

I wasn't aware that Dick and Al were allowed out without adult supervison.

Or is that your job?

 

 I haven't seen Dick in 20 years. 

 


08/23/22 08:55 AM #11522    

 

Michael McLeod

Mark: For what it's worth, old newspaper clippings are not copyrighted.


08/23/22 09:56 AM #11523    

 

Mark Schweickart

Mike -- I don't think these images were from newspapers.  


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