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11/21/22 01:44 PM #11874    

 

Michael McLeod

Hey Mark:

No sense in arguing taste, as you say. I've fallen in love with women who might not get a second glance from you.  

As for me I was and will remain enamoured of how Bishop uses everyday images to allude to the mysteries of life.

All that silver - so many references to silver, which is precious. But many of the creatures and objects that are that hue and that she describes are humble things. I know I'm talking about a technique that obviously didn't impress you but I  love the artistry of mixing the humble elements up with a grand revelation, or at least the pursuit of a grand revelation that will explain it all - or as she puts it, what we imagine knowledge, pure truth, to be. On the one hand we're living in a dung heap yet it's such a grand and glorious adventure as we look beyond the pungeant old shoreline smelling like dead fish toward the sea and the mysteries we imagine beyond it.

Then there is the rhythm of the language. I love to read this poem out loud. I like to think that poets like Bishop have such a command of that sound that you could be someone who doesn't understand english and still get a sense of grace and depth from simply hearing those words.

I have a hard time with poetry in general but a handful of poets have seduced me over the years, and Bishop is one of them. 

See if you like this one. the "one art" she refers to is, I think, the art of letting go. 

 

She mentions losing continents - she's referring to all the travels she made in her life. I think she was born in europe then lived in south america....and in the end it is a kind of love poem, perhaps.

 

 

 

 

One Art

The art of losing isn’t hard to master;
so many things seem filled with the intent
to be lost that their loss is no disaster.
 
Lose something every day. Accept the fluster
of lost door keys, the hour badly spent.
The art of losing isn’t hard to master.
 
Then practice losing farther, losing faster:
places, and names, and where it was you meant
to travel. None of these will bring disaster.
 
I lost my mother’s watch. And look! my last, or
next-to-last, of three loved houses went.
The art of losing isn’t hard to master.
 
I lost two cities, lovely ones. And, vaster,
some realms I owned, two rivers, a continent.
I miss them, but it wasn’t a disaster.
 
—Even losing you (the joking voice, a gesture
I love) I shan’t have lied. It’s evident
the art of losing’s not too hard to master
though it may look like (Write it!) like disaster.

11/21/22 11:21 PM #11875    

 

James Hamilton, M. D.

Mike and Mark,

Being old fashioned and a simple thinker, I like traditional, old fashioned poetry that rhymes and clearly makes a statement. One of my favorites, of which I kept a copy in my college " biology dissection kit", was from Emily Dickinson:

"Surgeons  must be careful

when they take the knife,

for underneath their fine incisions

stirs the culprit: life."

No, I did not become a surgeon, but I always thought her brevity and clarity was remarkable.

 

Jim​​​​​​

 

 

 

 

 


11/22/22 09:44 AM #11876    

 

Michael McLeod

Emily rocked. She could be absolutely divine one moment and then wink at you the next. 

She used dashes in what may seem like a strange way these days but don't let that bother you.

May we all have a nice day -- made nicer, and with a wink, by this lovely lady. Wish I'd had the chance to meet her, bow, and kiss the back of her hand.

The title of this poem is "Hope Is The Thing With Feathers." 

By the way, Jim, just how old-fashioned are you?

Have you ever prescribed a swig of paragoric, as my grandfather, who was a doctor with an office attached to his home on Main Street, a few doors down from (I think it was) Holy Rosary Church, did on more than one occasion?

 

 

 

“Hope” is the thing with feathers -
That perches in the soul -
And sings the tune without the words -
And never stops - at all -
 
And sweetest - in the Gale - is heard -
And sore must be the storm -
That could abash the little Bird
That kept so many warm -
 
I’ve heard it in the chillest land -
And on the strangest Sea -
Yet - never - in Extremity,
It asked a crumb - of me.
 
 

11/22/22 12:30 PM #11877    

 

James Hamilton, M. D.

Mike,

Old fashioned? Well, although during the years in which I was in active practice, as medicine, treatments and medications advanced, so did I. However, in those earlier years I did make a few house calls, wrote some prescriptions for compounded ointments, treated hypertension in days when there were only about four available medicines (three of which you have probably never heard), prescribed hundreds of digitalis pills for various cardiac patients and prescribed Duragesic (fentanyl) topical patches for certain types of pain. All of this, and many other treatments, were "state of the art" at the time.

So, "old fashioned" was a good thing once. In the future today's "advanced techniques" will join that group also.

Dr. Zollinger, a surgical icon in the history of OSU, once said something to the effect that "The goal of surgery is to eliminate ALL surgery". Think about that. In our lifetime we have seen invasive cardiologists and radiologists inserting heart valves through a catheter, putting in stents to open arteries and placing cuffs in aortic aneurysms all this replacing what used to be done intraoperatively by vascular surgeons. And those examples are just from the cardiovascular system.

Just imagine the future...

And yes, I probably have prescribed paragoric! 

Jim 


11/22/22 08:38 PM #11878    

 

Mark Schweickart

Mike – So touché, my friend, touché! Since I complained a bit that Ms. Bishop's poem seemed a bit more like prose than poetry, you expertly shot back with another example of her work that is the exact opposite – a villanell, no less. For those non-English majors in the crowd, a villanell has a very rigid poetic structure, consisting of five 3-line stanzas followed by a sixth 4-line concluding stanza. The first and third lines rhyme throughout, as do all of the second lines. For example, in this poem, the second lines all rhyme with  intent, as with spent, meant, went, etc., and of course, the first and third lines throughout all rhyme with master.

A more well-known example of this form would be Dylan Thomas' most famous poem:

Do not go gentle into that good night,
Old age should burn and rave at close of day;
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

Though wise men at their end know dark is right,
Because their words had forked no lightning they
Do not go gentle into that good night.

Good men, the last wave by, crying how bright
Their frail deeds might have danced in a green bay,
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

Wild men who caught and sang the sun in flight,
And learn, too late, they grieved it on its way,
Do not go gentle into that good night.

Grave men, near death, who see with blinding sight
Blind eyes could blaze like meteors and be gay,
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

And you, my father, there on the sad height,
Curse, bless, me now with your fierce tears, I pray.
Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

Obviously Ms. Bishop, with whom I must admit I was unacquainted, certainly knew her way around the poetry playground. And well she should have, since (as I have now learned by reading up on her) she  won both a Pulitzer Prize and a National Book Award for her work. She died in 1979, at age 68.

So, to answer your question, Mike – yes, this poem of hers, One Art,  is much more to my liking (although I do have a small quibble about her rhyming fluster with master, disaster etc.) Nonetheless the poem not only deserves kudos for being written in a very difficult form, but it also deserves admiration for being an interesting meditation on loss. It progressively moves from the inconsequential (door keys), to the more serious (previous homes), to the even more serious (moving great distances, changing continents), to perhaps the most serious (losing a loved one and their remembered joking voice and gesture). And then there is the final parenthetical admonition of (Write it!) which I take to mean that she is recommending writing about that which is painful as a way out of the pain. Maybe I am wrong about that, but I think that might be what this strange parenthetical insert might mean. 

So thanks Mike for teaching us about Elizabeth Bishop.

I guess it's no surprise that I am drawn to a more rhyming style, being the wannabe songwriter that I am. (Or at my age, should I change wannabe to wishI'dbeen). And speaking of my songs, I don't think I have abused you guys here on the site for a while with my yodeling, so woo hoo, here's another one. And speaking of "my age," please don't envison the singer as being in his 70's. The situation and sentiment is more appropriate to a someone in their 20s, 30s or 40's.

And of course these lyrics certainly do not have the constraints of a villanell, but I do aspire to some basic rhyming.




11/23/22 12:29 AM #11879    

 

David Mitchell

Sounds like a bunch of damn English Majors if you ask me.


11/23/22 11:17 AM #11880    

 

Mark Schweickart

Damn, Dave! I hope you didn't miss your spittoon when you had to unleash a big stream of chawed tabacky so's you could make that pronouncement. 
But seriously, I guess I did go off my English major rails a bit with my last post. Sorry about that. 

 


11/23/22 11:47 AM #11881    

 

Michael McLeod

Jim: I can see how that would be an inspiring quote. An ambitious one, for sure. And if you're a visionary, absolutely doable. 

Mark: Yeah that's like a reverse one and a half somersault with four and a half twists off the 3-meter board. Ha. Meter.The irony is that she slyly chose that difficult form for a poem about something being supposedly easy. Also, without listening to you yodel, as I am still digesting my lunch, I'm going to guess what you came up with to rhyme with men being "liars" in that composition is "funeral pyres." 

Dave: I resent that. Like any good buckeye, 90 percent of my brain right now is currently occupied by sharp sticks, a roaring fire, and a caveman-level preoccupation with the upcoming game involving the team I shall refer to as those pricks up north. Also, tufts of hair are sprouting up all over my body and I have begun conversing in monosyllables. It's a real time-saver, actually.

My nephew, by the way, blew over two thousand dollars to get two tickets to the game. Taking his son. 


11/24/22 12:41 PM #11882    

 

Mark Schweickart

Happy Thanksgiviing everyone! If you are having trouble getting into the festive mood this year, here's a little ditty from Michael Shannon (from the opening of the Stephen Colbert Show last night) to cheer you up.



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11/24/22 01:37 PM #11883    

 

David Mitchell

Remember those family gatherings around a turkey dinner?

A great day to count our blessings.


11/25/22 11:41 AM #11884    

 

Mary Margaret Clark (Schultheis)




11/25/22 11:56 AM #11885    

 

Michael McLeod

Thankful for my roots, for my family, for my fabulous life partner, for my children, for the chances at redemption I've been given all my life, for being from a wonderful town with a great university and a legendary football team and a certain steadiness and stability that will never leave me no matter how wackadoodle I am or how far I roam, for having the experience of meeting woody hayes just after I was drafted, and shaking his hand at the restaurant on olentangy whose name I have forgotten (My mother dragged me over to him and said "this is my son and he just told me he'd rather meet you than the pope," to which woody replied "Well, the pope doesn't have a football team." ) for having a classy, outgoing mom like that and a hard-working pop and three sisters, each of them beautiful in their own way, for fabulous friends and challenging stories still to tell, for rhubarb pie and fancy dinnerware and knowing that I have just enough brain power to finish this story I am writing that is driving me crazy at the moment, and for that funny as hell 'songs of the holiday' thing that mark just posted. 

i could go on but I won't.

Happy thanksgiving and count your blessings. 


11/25/22 03:10 PM #11886    

 

James Hamilton, M. D.

Mike, 

That would be the Jai Lai, Woody's favorite restaurant - "In all the world there's only one".

We are here in Albuquerque, NM spending the Thanksgiving weekend with my sister and numerous nieces, nephew's and grands. Weather is cooperating so far and, hopefully, will be able to get back to CO before any snowstorms. Drive down here was unexpectedly less crowded than in years past. Only hit one tumbleweed even though we encountered some strong crosswinds. Noticed an unusual absence of pronghorn antelope, don't know why, perhaps due to drought. Lots of arroyos and creeks were dry. Pecos River had minimal flow through the town of Pecos. For all you Floridians who have seen more than your share of rain, this is the part of the country that is your antithesis. At least the heat has not been a factor on this journey.

Go Bucks!

Jim 


11/26/22 11:07 AM #11887    

 

Michael McLeod

bring me a tumbleweed as a souvenir


11/26/22 03:07 PM #11888    

 

Joseph D. McCarthy

Thoughts to ponder

Confucius:  I hear and I forget.  I see and I remember.  I do and I understand.

Sondheim:  I prefer neurotic people, I like to hear rumblings beneath the surface.

Sondheim:  Work is what you do for others.  Art is what you do for yourself.

Hammerstein II:  There is a very real relationship, both quantitatively and qualitatively, between what you contribute and what you get out of this world.

Real meanings of words

DELIBERATION, n.  The act of examining one's bread to determine which side it is buttered on.

DELUGE, n.  A notable first experiment inbaptism which washed away the sins (and sinners) of the world.

DIAGNOSIS, n.  A physician's forcast of the disease by the patient's pulse and purse.

DIAPHRAGM, n.  A muscular partition separating disorders of the chest from disorders of the bowels.

THE END


11/26/22 05:11 PM #11889    

 

Mark Schweickart

Ouch! There is no joy in Mudville. 


11/27/22 03:44 AM #11890    

 

David Mitchell

Yikes!

Even my young "Maize and Blue" buddies didn't see that coming!!!!


11/27/22 09:17 AM #11891    

 

Mary Margaret Clark (Schultheis)

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11/27/22 11:00 AM #11892    

 

Michael McLeod

In all seriousness, Joe:

I'm going to find something with that confucious quote on it and plaster it on my office wall. That man did not waste words.

In the meantime I am devastated to my core by that game with the team up north.

That was enough of a seismic blow to make the olentangy river change its course.

It's going to take years to recover.

If you look back at the history that series has been streaky all along. 

I sure hope they can turn things around but it's hard to be optimistic at the moment.

 


11/29/22 12:58 PM #11893    

 

James Hamilton, M. D.

Joe McC,

Another thought to ponder (my wife put this one on our kitchen bulletin board):

Sudha Murty: "Doing what you like is freedom, liking what you do is happiness."

JIm


11/29/22 02:12 PM #11894    

 

Joseph D. McCarthy

Jim, I like that one.

A thought to ponder:

    At a number of websites, for Medical and DMV - for those in Michigan that means Dept. of Motor Vehichles, to set up an account you must enter your Email address as your "ID."

     Although my wife is on Facebook, she has no separate Email address, she just uses mine.  

     Problem is when I attempt to set up an account, the sites reject me because my Email is used for another's "ID."  With the DMV I took up the labor intensive job of setting up a "Gmail" account, "G" for keeping and and all goverment type accounts.  So after five hours I was finally able to complete the application for a renewal of my drivers license for the next five years.

Has anyone else, who only has one Email account, run into this problem?

Joe

 


11/30/22 02:36 PM #11895    

 

Michael McLeod

I love writing about interesting characters - and individuals who deserve attention.

There's one who makes an appearance in a supporting role in this column whom I really, really like. Given what I know now about how hard the people in this profession have to work, especially these days, and what I remember about those very few who tolerated my craziness and saw the potential in me, I was really happy to honor her, and told her so.

I have a souvenir from my visit to this guy's backyard, having bought a small wood-fired cup from him. It sat on my desk next to my keyboard, providing inspiration as I wrote this.

It ain't your average coffee cup. 

Here's the story, which won't be published until next month. So you're getting a sneak preview.

 

 

The mid-century neighborhood where Richard Munster lives with his wife and their two children dates back to an era when people took a big back yard for granted.  There’s plenty of room here for swing sets, swimming pools, gardens, and barbecue pits – or in Munster’s case, for one shed, three stacks of firewood, a collection of oversized plastic pails filled with earth and clay, a monolithic red brick monstrosity roughly the size of an SUV, and an array of folding tables bearing some of the creations that emerged from it.

Munster is a potter. The red-brick monster is his kiln, an old-school, wood-fired affair that he built himself. 

You can set aside any preconceived associations, be they literary or domestic, that the words “potter” and “pottery” may conjure up for you, courtesy of Harry Potter, Beatrix Potter,, Pottery Barn etc. Munster creates a broad range of abstract sculptures that wind up in the homes of local collectors, though it is true that some of his smaller works – cups that fit into the palm of your hand with a deceptive heft, smooth on the inside but honeycombed with sharp planes and mottled, earthy hues on the outside – look a bit like what the Neanderthals might have used if they’d had time for tea.

Pottery made in electric or gas kilns is relatively predictable. Pottery that emerges from a wood-fired kiln has an element of surprise and a primal, organic quality in color and surface texturing, thanks to being exposed to the scalding storm of random ash that circulates in the kiln.

Munster’s obsession with pottery dates back his years as a disconnected punk rock devotee, slogging through classes at Bishop Moore High School in the 1970s.  “I just couldn’t see the sense of being taught a math formula I knew I’d never use, or getting written up for wearing the wrong color socks,” he remembers.

What he needed was a challenge. It came his way in the form of a newly-created, hands-on pottery class taught by the school’s beloved art teacher, Jolie Spelman, who decided to include it in an innovative art practicum program that still flourishes under her direction. 

She reasoned that the way pottery combines creativity with practicality – or as she puts it, “Pottery just wants to be touched. It wants to be used” – would engage students. Munster was one of the first to prove her point.

 “Richard was an eager, hungry kid,” she remembers. “He was the kind of student who pushed me, who challenged me as a teacher. That’s what the good ones will do. He would say, ‘Can we make it bigger? Can you do this, can you do that?’ “

Munster has been doing this and doing that ever since, first as a hobby, then as a profession, with a degree in visual arts and design from the University of Central Florida and a stint as an artist-in-residence at the Maitland Art and History Center to his credit. He also teaches art classes as an adjunct at Valencia Community College and has a studio at FAVO, an artist collective in a converted motel in the Mills-50 district – not to mention an ongoing, open-air classroom of his own design.

His backyard kiln is made entirely of special bricks designed to stand up to intense heat:  a factory that makes them is headquartered in Florida, the better to serve a steady customer in the Kennedy Space Center, which needs them to help rebuild pads after every launch.

Munster’s needs are more modest, but in their own way, just as intense.

Two or three times a year, he gathers up dozens of clay vases, cups and sculptures ready for firing, most of them his, but some representing works by a circle of fellow ceramic artists.

The works are loaded into his kiln, known as a “train kiln” because its profile suggests a vintage, coal-fired train engine. One chamber of the kiln is loaded with firewood. The air flow draws the fire it produces through the ceramics chamber next to it and then up through the chimney.

“Basically,” says Munster, “it’s a single, continuous, 2400-degree flame,” one that needs to burn for 48 hours to glaze the pottery, hence the need for someone to tend the fire, day and night, for two days.  Sometimes Munster loads up on coffee and handles that task himself; sometimes a small circle of fellow ceramic artists manage it in shifts.

Dan Hess, chief curator of the Maitland Art Center, was invited to attend one of those firings. Hess moved to the Orlando area several years ago from New York City, where he was immersed in one of the most vibrant visual arts scenes in the world.  He misses it, sometimes more than others, though he never expected a visit to a suburban back yard and a glimpse of faces glowing in firelight to bring back the sense of fierce commitment and camaraderie that he remembers from the city that never sleeps.

“The feeling I got when I walked into that back yard – it stopped me in my tracks,” he says. “That focus, that singular intensity, that sense of community, that dedication to an art – it was like walking into a really good restaurant in Soho. You didn’t just feel it. You could smell it in the air. ”

Literally and figuratively.

 


12/01/22 10:09 AM #11896    

 

Mark Schweickart

Another gem of a story, Mike. Way to go.
It does raise one question for me though. How do his neighbors react to all that woodsmoke furiously belching into the air for 48 straight hours? Any complaints?


12/01/22 12:31 PM #11897    

 

Michael McLeod

Good observation Mark. I'm limited for space or I would have included it. Maybe I should have. One rule of thumb is to not leave questions that are likely to come up in a reader's mind unanswered.

I did ask him and I did ask around. Everybody seemed cool with it. The only visible sign is a flame about a foot tall that comes out of the chimney, and it's just three nights a year. And there is no zoning problem. Not all that diff than a cookout. The ashes don't fly out I guess they art trapped or consumed somehow. I didn't know a damn thing about pottery and if you had told me I would get charged up about writing a story on the subject I would have laughed. But I can see now how people can get into it. 

PS would it be sacriligious of me to ask somebody to say a novena for the football team?


12/01/22 05:11 PM #11898    

Joseph Gentilini

HI Mike, I liked the article and the poem.  Downtown Columbus has a fine arts building and one of the things they offer (I think they still do) is the ability to make pottery.  I am a clutz so I never tried.  I liked the poem also - I seem to be misplacing things and then complain I can't find them. I'll ask for help and Leo will look someplace and there they are.  As I get older, it doesn't get any better.  What is harder for me is losing good friends and people I love!  joe


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