Lawrence Foster
My thanks to you folks for the compliments about the sketch. I do appreciate the feedback.
Stories about Walhalla. I am a bit unsure about this but here goes anyway.
I have written a story that has a brief Walhalla scene in it. I wrote this for my writer's group in April of last year. So the fact that this topic is coming up here in the last few posts is like, weird (Cue the music from The Twilight Zone.) I just posted the story on the User Forums and it is titled "Third and Michigan Gang."
On this forum there have been comments about stories from our teen years and stories of the Walhalla adventures that people had there growing up.
I was rarely in that area during 7th and 8th grade at IC. I had to use Google Maps to get things straight in my story. I also searched for images on the web and found some too. Beth, when I was looking at those maps I remembered that you lived near where I imagined my scene to take place.
There are two people who I need to thank for their unwitting contributions to this story. First is Mike Del Bianco and his M.A.F.I.A. from high school. To honor him I used his last name in the story. The other person is one of our IC classmates who went to Aquinas and told the Italian all-weather tires joke that I used. I will not mention his name as the joke may have some offensive words in it and I am the one responsible for putting it here.
Jim I do appreciate your specific encouragement about my writing attempts. Thank you.
My intent in this story is to give a laugh in parts of it but also to reflect some of the times and possible experiences of growing up that I and maybe others might have experienced. There is a lot of fiction in this story so don't take it as complete truth.
Everyone feel free to give me feedback about the story. Be it positive or negative I need to hear it if I want to get better at writing. If you don't want to post it here just send me comments in an email.
Thanks.
Oh, one last thing. The prompt for writing this story was to take a line from a movie and use it as your opening line. I ended up having 7 quotes from various movies and they are listed at the end of the story. See how many you can find as you read through it!
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